Shoephly's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dan Roth - Aura]

Lovely!

So here are my thoughts on the matter;

The pad sweep thingy at the very begining was perfect, great progression, really nice melody (this goes for the overall song),
At 0:58 I would've loved to see a fill, or a break, or actually something, because when the kick drum hits in, it feels sort of monotone (i'm probably not using the right word...)
At 0:58 - 1:25 ish, the high pitched pad thingy sounded a little off for me, don't know if it really matters to be honest but I found it note worthy.
The buildup at 1:32 was worse than the one you did previously, or rather the mix of synths was worse. The one you did before had a much nicer bassy feeling to it, and when I began listening to this song I was hoping you didn't change that part.
The little break at 2:13-2:16 It wouldve worked out really well if you had a crash with the drum there. In my head that would've sounded pretty awesome.
the melody at 2:32 didn't really feel as if it was part of the song, if you maybe mixed it in softly with the synth used just earlier - fading out, it would preserve the togetherness of it, everything beyond this point was perfectly adequate :D

You are very talented my good man, don't ever stop making music!

-shoephly

iheartsonyheadphones responds:

Wow!

Thanks! I've taken your points into consideration, thankyou very much sir!

And even more thanks for the very kind words!

Much love, Dan <33

[Dan Roth - Happy Hardcore!]

hmmmmmmm

Like where this is going; i like the feel.

Though, the buildup didn't flow to well in my ears, but i'll give you the benefit of the doubt because this is infact a draft :)

But as i said, I like where this is going, rethink the buildup a little and cut down a little on the bitcrusher, sometimes too much actually is too much :D

keep up the good work bro! :D

-shoephly

[Friday Fox - RAGE! (V.3)]

pretty good

the kick seems a tad bit too loud, creates cliping at quite a lot of places in the song, get it down a little and it should automatically make the song quite a bit better xD, that seems to be the only thing i can find "off" about this version.

[[Happy-Hardcore]One Last Time]

shoephly seal of approval

has been given,

it's a high honour,

that's right. :)

anyway, really nice work! great happy hardcore, only thing i could think of where you couldve approved would be to add another synth somewhere with a low "attack timer" (hope you understand what i mean, so that i sounds "punchier"!??).

Keep it up bro :D

PS check out my latest submission, you might actually like it :D

-shoephly

[DJ~Clyme - Fly On]

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmm,
high bpm but extremely enjoyable in the chill way as well as the eargasm way. :D

Don't know if there's anything i can critique about this.
great work, keep it up bro! :D

-shoephly

DjClyme responds:

thanks for the review! glad you liked it! :)

[Rainwave - Scream into Nowhere]

Mmmmmmm

Nice melody, nice buildups.
Really enjoyable :D

keep it up, and happy late birthday bro, hope you had a nice one. :)

-shoephly

Indigorain responds:

I'm really glad you liked it, I appreciate your review! ^^
I had a totally awesome birthday, thanks! :D:D

[MIGARI - Rock This World]

Mmmmmmmm

such quality in your work man, extremely enjoyable.
Can't find anything to give criteque on.

keep it up. ^^

-shoephly

migaribeats responds:

Thaaaanks!

[Havet]

nice

very chill, enjoyed it alot. :)

[Wtf? o_O]

you are too awesome

best last sentence of a song EVER :D

ioneofmany responds:

Hahaha thanks Shoe! I know you like her _"pro"_ Svenska. XD

[[HappyHC]Jumpin the Crowd]

pretty good man, pretty good indeed

Not sure if I really liked the intro; clicked your song then after like 10 seconds felt like i wanted to close it down and move on, but eventually decided to keep it in the background. I've had it loop twice now, and must say, it's pretty damn enjoyable! :D
like the feel of it all,

Great work! :D

-shoephly

haxory responds:

Thanks for your review Shoephly, you have a few cool tracks too!