Niice!
I really, like how you use the drums, kinda hiphop:y and still not. But really awesome nevertheless.
I can see the potential, but there is just one thing that bothers me, and I'm not sure if people might agree with me, but personally the higher tones on the lead melody don't sound fluent. I suggest maybe rethinking just a little about what note you have the higher notes on as well as maybe a slightly different sound.
Hope this feedback helps a little.
Keep it up! ^^
-shoephly