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your style...

...I like it. ^^

Enjoy this a lot!

I really like the drums in this piece.
Only thing taht bothers me a little, and yes i know it's progressive, but there isn't that fluidity in your transition which for me makes the best progressive songs "the best"
You kinda made one thing, finished it and added the other stuff just after.

I know it's not done yet so I give you a 10/10 hoping you'll think about what i said :p

Great stuff

TomDavies responds:

Hey, thanks for the review!

The mix is supposed to consist of 10 different melodies that fade into each other :)

The fluidity and proper mastering of this track is something i'm currently working on :D

Thanks again!

nice

Great song, the only thing i would advice you to do is to autotune the vocals a little, since your vocals are off key sometimes.

xchurch173 responds:

Thanks! the original has more auto tune on it. this isn't actually me singing. i got my friend to help with it. but thank you :)

(- -,)b

I usually don't write comments for the "top" songs, since the review just get's lost and no one will ever read it. Though here I don't care; it has to be said; you; are; freaking! - - - Awesome! O.o

Great song! You should send your stuff to whoever's in charge of the "new" magaman stuff, since there's been so many there's bound to be more, they could use this stuff and you'd earn some money on the side as well ;)

keep being awesome. :D

-shoephly

NemesisTheory responds:

HEY! I will still read it! <3

Thank you very much for the kind words! And to be honest, I doubt they would listen to it, they're too busy with more/way more important stuff. ^^

I wouldn't complain about the money though! XDDD~~

I'll do my best, and thanks for the review!

lol :D

it's pretty nice once it get's going ^^

keep it up

Beats4Beets responds:

Hahah thanks!
It only took like 20 minutes to finish xD
I think its kind of catchy

nice

quite enjoyed this :)
Thank you :D

smelin responds:

You're very welcome :) This is definitely my favorite Mario melody of all time.

lol

0:34+ it sounds as if it could actually be an awesome song,

having that said: I loled, great song and i hope whoever the joke was intended to(bjorn) loled too. xD
great stuff

10/10

ioneofmany responds:

Lol thanks man! Björn actually posted above you! :D

Great work, great work indeed (- -,)b

I was first introduced to your music when I saw your HoN teaser song on the NG top 25, which for the record I want you to finish! :D - and then all your latest stuff have been gold man, I'm digging your style and I'm digging this song.
You're going places - You're that good! ^^

keep it up

-shoephly

ioneofmany responds:

Wow tack! That would be a dream to be able to go places because of music so i'm really honored you think that I have a shot! :D

Cheers,
--Chris

very nice, very nice indeed!

I liked the piano melody a lot, very calm and beautifull.
A suggestion on what you could change is to rethink a lil how your drum loop get's introduced into the song. Instead of going in with the whole loop velocity automated, feels a little needlessly sudden, you could've started out with just the bass drum to give a lil epic feeling then slowly added the hihats and whatnot. Hope you understand what I'm getting at since while I'm writing this I confuse myself a lil xD

Very nicely done :)

-shoephly

IVoltage responds:

Thanks again for your review Shoephly!

I have to admit (with shame) that i did just learn about how to make the Automation Clips work, so i was kind of eager to optimize the use of it in a song. But now that you mention this i do agree with you, it might sound a little bit better if i start out with one or two pieces of the drums and let the rest come in slightly later. As i've said before i'll keep working on this song and i'll definitely let you know if i reupload a enhanced version!

Thanks again for the review and the kind words, it's truely great to hear that people actually like your work!

IVoltage

nice

Loved the intro, awesome with the echo, later on the echo just feels a little iffy, but that's just my opinion. But one thing I would like to change is around the 1 minute mark when the lead melody hits in and the vocals go "what'cha want from me" I'd like a brief pause and then hit in with the melody, would make it sound really nice :)

Keep up the good work :)

-shoephly

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